Week Eight: Passport Critique

This is our revised passport design! The changes that we have decided to make to the passports are as follows:

Group critique:

• Perhaps getting rid of the packed logo at the edge of every page.
• Spelling mistakes (check)
• Replace Team 32 on the back page and change it to the Check In logo or the work Check In
• glue pages together?

Lecturer Critique:

• look into maybe using a different paper stock
• liked the fact that it is foldable out of one piece of paper-very resourceful
• looks like its still in mock-up stage a little, how could you make it look more polished
• maybe look at using a different stock? newsprint?
• like the fact that we changed our prize from lolly to one prize at end, where we were thinking of doing an art pack.
• Overall we got a 'PASS' at this stage 

Team 32